Hello and welcome to my blog post. Today’s blog post will be about my English writing. I am sharing you guys this in hope of helping or inspiring anyone reading this. Feel free to give any advice as it may be helpful for me in the future of my writing.
Statement of intent:
The purpose of this writing is expressing my way of using different language features and showing how I use a wide range of vocabulary. I will show my way of writing in clear information by using a standard process. I want to write about the beach because there’s a lot of different things in your sight that are or could happen. It’s a place where your senses suddenly become heightened from your sight to your smell and taste to what you hear. It’s also a place of freedom and relaxation where you thoughts go away and you’re just at one with the air. My audience will be the reader and the writer. The reason I will be writing to myself as well is because I want to impress not only my audience by myself as well. I want to shock myself and be able to question my own abilities. My mood of writing will be around the aspect of symphony, rhythm, and clearness. This style of writing will also help me stay in line with my ideas and stay in sync.
Writing:
The beach is where the ocean meets the land and collides to form one. As I let my foot break through the relaxed sand I stare at the never ending fulfillness of water. The smell of hot chips spreads throughout the area like the golden sunlight. Seeing the golden sun reminds me of the ripples from the sea that comes back and forth. Laughter and chatter echoes through this place as I let my mind and thoughts drift of like I’m in space.
My feet start to burn to the scorching hot concrete. While I’m walking around scanning for something to eat, I lay my eyes on some crumpets at a stand and buy two without hesitation. As I let the two crumpets drown down my mouth, I see a lifelike cinderella girl walking past me. Glancing at her face with my heart thinking she’s so majestic and admiring. I’m eager to approach her and say something but I hold back. The sun slowly comes down wondering if I should make the first move, listening to my heart I march forward, towards her. I get to her and tap her on the shoulder. With her attention I express my thoughts and feelings “ Excuse me I saw you from a distance and thought you looked beautiful. I was wondering if we could hangout?” “Yes,” she replied. We walk over to the beach area and sit down. Laughing and yapping, we looked like a happy couple in the silence of our time. I held her hand and leaned over whispering the words “I love you” and then kissed her. I feel a sensation of clearness in my mind. It went silent at the most, listening to her heavy breathing I felt a little bit of guilt. Thinking could this be real, that I found my perfect melody to my song. She stood up and left without a word. I thought to myself what I did wrong until she came back with a bouquet of flowers. Then in style she dropped down on her knees and asked “Will you be my partner” I replied “Yes” and we kissed.
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Ngā mihi
Nu’uuli Failauga Latu

